Resume review requested

hello guys,

I am a M Fin student at a non target looking to break into the finance field.I have no finance background whatsoever and worked as a software consultant at a large software service provider in India.I got my resume done by a professional resume writer.

http://www.razume.com/documents/9379

He did his best to extract whatever he could from me and tried putting a finance spin to my work experience.I feel the content is good but the format looks kind of weird.I haven't seen this kind in any of the resumes.Wat say guys? Did i waste 100 dollars..should i reformat it? right now its very difficult for a non target like me to get even an internship,so I really need your help guys.Thanks for your time.

p.s. the resume seems to be spread over two pages and the alignment is also off, however the original is fitted into one page!

10 Comments
 

I’m not sure whether the guy is an expert in the area. I remember when I was writing mine before I went into intern. Basically, your resume is too wordy. You have to make some bullet points and extend from there. Nobody would want to read it. Plus the contents you’re using is not the norm. You may have to reform all of it.

Get your 100 bucks back.

 

your resume format suckkkkkks. that was a waste of $100.

keep it to 1 page, take out that career summary section, bring down your skills section to bottom, take out "demonstrated professional...blah"

don't center your shit, keep them aligned to the left. have a line space between your schools, instead of professional chronology "work experience"

gee, wtf???? what a scam business

 

I agree with anyone above who shit on your resume. That's hilarious-- next time just burn a Benjamin, rather than give it away to some asshole who's going to lie to you.

 

Thanks guys for all your inputs..! I ll work on my resume nd get back.. nd for the resume writer,i ll screw his case for sure !!

 

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