Hello,
Can you give me feedback on my email format; is it too brief ?
"""Hello X, We are both alumni of school. I would like to have a chat with you to learn more about your journey and how you got to where you are today. Please let me know if you have a moment to spare. """
Also, Can you give me your thoughts on networking via linkedin instead of cold emailing? I find it alot easier through linkedin; my email constantly bounces back.
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Try something more casual and conversational, and try and tailor it to the specific person. Maybe something along the lines of "I've love to hear about your experience in x group. Would you be available to chat sometime?"
Email is much more effective - you just need to make sure you have the right email address.
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