Resume Review: Welcoming All Criticism
Sending out applications to junior roles in :
Management Consulting
Equity Research Associate
IB TMT Analyst
VC
PE
Need some help with my resume, looking for some solid feedback. Graduated from a non target, large state school, BS Econ. No prior internships or work experience relevant to the fields mentioned above, except consulting to some extent. Co-founded/ Directed two startups, raised seed funding for one(plenty media and press). Acting role was more inclined towards "Director." I have now step aside completely in order to peruse and focus on a career in one of the industries mentioned above. I had a previous resume with a media mentions section that listed the source and web link to the articles. I have deleted that, added a bullet point under that startups section and said "Featured in xyz, xyz, xyz" thanks to broadstbully for the tip. I have also reduced the amount of bullet points from my previous cv/resume which helped get the CV to a single page rather than two. Appreciate all the feedback.
I would look into taking out some of the bullet points from your high school jobs. Formatting and content generally look very strong.
Appreciate the feedback. Are you referring to AT&T?
Yes your AT&T experience. It is from awhile back so maybe shorten it up to two bullet points. Your don't want it to have equal weight for your more recent accomplishments.
I'd work on your phrasing of certain sections. Is English your second language? You use many words and tenses that seem out of place or redundant.
hahaha no, born and raised in DC. I have not checked it for any grammatical errors just yet, but are you referring to the bullet points or the title of the sections?
i would put deans list under education section. Each job would be fine with 3-4 Bullet points. More than 4 seem distracting.
Selling->sold?
Noted.
As you can see, I've written a short description underneath the first two companies because they are startups. Would this be an issue?
Please stop posting new shiit every day I hope you don't get hired
You need to relax also your position saying you're a director will make people laugh. Also don't list your classes I think that's so stupid. Everyone here went to college
Your GPA needs to be on there, because it's still important at this point in your career and you're at a non-target. If not, they'll think it sucks. Axe the relevant course work and capstone class project stuff. Every school has that stuff, no one will care. Have you not done any philanthropy stuff?
P.S. Bodybuilding made me chuckle :D
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