Telling Ppl I want to move to Boston
I am networking for job opportunities in Boston and am reaching out to people (mostly cold emails). My fiance is based in Boston that is driving me to relocate. Would you advise that I mention this in my initial email, as I reach out to folks, or wait till I get on the phone with them? I ask because there is no trace of Boston in my resume, so people might not know why I am reaching out to em.
Based on the most helpful WSO content, it's generally better to keep your initial cold email professional and focused on your career interests and goals rather than personal reasons like your fiancé being in Boston. Mentioning your intent to relocate to Boston for professional reasons (e.g., interest in the Boston market, specific firms, or opportunities) can help establish credibility and relevance. You can always bring up personal reasons, like your fiancé, later in a phone conversation if it feels appropriate and natural.
For example, you could say something like:
"Hi Name,
I hope this email finds you well. My name is [Your Name], and I am currently [your current role/position]. I am very interested in transitioning to the Boston market and would greatly appreciate the opportunity to learn more about your experience at company. If you have 10-15 minutes to chat, I’d be grateful for your insights. Looking forward to hearing from you. Best regards, [Your Name]"
This approach keeps the focus on your professional aspirations while subtly addressing your intent to move to Boston.
Sources: Should I get straight to the point in my cold email?, Cold email networking while employed?, Two Internships Later: What I wish I Knew While Recruiting! (Toronto), One Cold Email to Change Your Life (Result right here), Commercial Real Estate in Boston
when I was recruiting out of state to a city I had no real connection to, I mentioned that I was interested in the city because it was closer to home and mentioned a lot regarding putting down roots so the firms knew I was committed to staying
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