Applying to MS Programs

Hi everybody,

I'm not sure if this doesn't belong here since I'm mostly applying to MSF programs, but I figured I would give it a go. Does anybody see major issues with words or formatting? I'm concerned that some of my descriptions are too wordy.

Also for the curious, I'm applying to UT Austin, Tulane MEnergy, Duke MMS, SMU MMS, Villanova, Houston, and possibly Purdue. My GMAT is not good, testing around ~650 (Q 55th%, V 85th%) and taking it in a few days so I'm hoping that a less quantitative MMS program will accept me because of decent ECs and internship experience.

Thanks!