Hello,
Please take a look.
http://www.razume.com/documents/22565
I would like to also know strengths and weaknesses of my profile in general.
Thanks,
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Two suggestions that stand out right away:
1) Round GPA up to 3.7-It just looks a lot cleaner than 3.69 and the rounding is immaterial 2) In your current position you switch tenses in your bullets. I think I understand why (the first bullet describes your everyday responsibilities and the others describe projects you completed) but clarification may be necessary
The other two comments I have may be personal formatting nits but I think all your lines should start farther on the left and not be indented as much. Also, I would recommend using less space between your bullet points and where the words start. That amount of white space to me looks awkward. Again, personal nits and would welcome others opinions
Your spacing is irregular between entries in your Professional Experience, and there's far too much spacing between leadership entries. Make those single-spaced and put a 6-pt break after the final line of each professional entry. Try to have less generic interests, make them descriptive of your personality. Give someone a reason to pick you over another 'chess, poker, marathon runner, debate team, reading finance books' kid.
Congrats on the Eagle Scout, from one to another.
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