Can someone help with editing this 'title' on my resume?

Hello all,

Just working on a paragraph and was wondering if i can get some help in the re-wording:

"(Country) raised (Nationality) with over 6 years of solid trading floor experience. Culturally intelligent and quadrilingual individual who has worked in various multi-cultural environments. Completing graduate studies in Shanghai and ready to return back to Hong Kong to apply my expertise towards maximizing organizational performance." Thanks all

4 Comments
 

You say "culturally intelligent" and then say that you worked in "various multi-cultural environments." Seems like you're saying the same exact thing twice.

I don't see the need for the word "solid," maybe say something like algorithmic/fudamental/etc.

 

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