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Take out "References on request" it is a given if they want them they ask for them.

From what I can tell your internships were only a few weeks.... don't make this so apparent in your descriptions by saying two days here, one week here etc.

Saying you "enjoyed your time" on those two desks is extremely poor and useless, say something you learned on each desk. All the skills you learned seem to be bullshit intangibles rather than no core skills gained from your time. Another example is, "gained an insight into..."

Change "Elected into this position" with "Elected position"

Don't use produced, use prepared. Produced sounds bizarre.

Also, take out "Google Finance" account, that is not a certification or training... You can add Personal Account Trading to interests instead if you insist on having it.