Destroy my resume.

Hey guys, I am preparing for my application to grad school. Also, I am confused about one bullet points. When I interned in Great Wall securities, I printed contracts and then sent them to another department to get them sealed. I know it is a very simple task. How can I describe this task to make it sounds better? Any feedback on my resume is greatly appreciated! Thanks in advance.

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damn bro.

not to come across as a dick but that is a poor resume.

It positively seems bare. Almost like you do not have much to talk about. There is a lot of empty spaces and for someone who has graduated and on his forst job that is just not right.

Decrease the spacing from one job to another and the start of a new section

Embellish your resume. Add more points to your work experiences.

Also make the points concise and be consistent.

Start every point with capital letters

Put a section for Activities. Separate it from Expierience. Surely you must have been part of some clubs and/or been on some sport team. Ideally have a leadership position.

This is for grad school so maybe not required but add a section for skills. (Excel, bloomberg etc). Maybe get second opinion on that.

Education is taking up too much space (well not here but for a normally good resume). Since it is grad school Id rather see an added section below EDUCATION saying Relevant Coursework. Pick 2 relevant courses and write one or 2 points each about what you did in it and whether you conducted any research etc or used any statistical model etc etc.

 

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