Destroy this POS

-Quantify achievement -What kind of college has a 4.33 GPA scale? -Don't call yourself a Chinaman

The way you display your ECs is weird. Change it.

Agree on the EC's. Never seen it done like that.

are you serious?

get rid of financial markets from your interests

curious bout the 4.33 as well..

Hello CHINAMAN

• standardize the EC's
• put more info on the most recent internships, they are directly relevant
• overall, quantify RESULTS over DUTIES

Thanks for the feedback guys.

My school is weird like that, should I just standardize it to 4.0? It's a canadian school and canada doesn't have any set grading scheme.

I'll work on the EC's and try to quantify my achievements, thanks for the feedback!

Any other comments? Any shot at a BB?

Agree with UFO -- if you're going for IBD, include more bullet points for your banking internship.

Which Canadian school is this? I've heard of a 12.0 system here. Never a 4.33 system though.

maybe a 13.0 system that he just divided by 3 in an attempt to standardize? hahahaha

Do you need to list your internship at that boutique as part time?

I would leave the "part time" off, but if anyone asks about what hours you worked be truthful, of course.