Have to submit resume soon. Please critique

Just started my second year at university. I'm looking for an internship at the local offices in the Netherlands. Give it your best shot!

http://www.razume.com/documents/21895

 

It's pretty short so you need to add more detail relevant to whatever it is you're applying to. There are a lot of formatting inconsistencies you should fix, like the dates (no end date for the second thing? write "present"), the job titles / departments, and capitalizing or not capitalizing things (don't need to capitalize all the words in your interests).

 
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Thank you!! I'll sort it out right away. I have no finance related internships/work experience besides the accounting internship, so I'm looking for a PWM internship to fill out my resume. My next goal is getting an IBD internship, but I first have to get my GPA up for that.

I'm also in the process of founding a financial study association at my university, but I don't think I'll have everything up and running before the end of the month, and it'll take at least half a semster in order to create some big projects. Should I still put it on my resume?

 

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