I recently updated my resume and used alot of WSO's tips, any more advice?

SO MUCH BETTER! Congrats!

You are kind of missing your name and address

Have you held any other relevant positions? Have you received any awards? Please write your GPA down

excel --> Excel communicating --> communicated change visa to Visa and master card to MasterCard Be more specific on what you "worked" on the AR/AP (to me, "working" is a bit vague): I would change "Worked with the AR/AP on the M-Commerce project that allows cell phones to be an alternative to credit cards." to "Processed AR and AP on the M-Commerce project, allowing cell phones to be an alternative to credit cards."

Managing the FX changes --> Managed the FX changes

Maybe talk about which musical instruments you played.

Hope this helps.