No holds barred. Rip into my resume and tell me what should be changed. Thanks in advance!
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Jun 02, 2015
Career Resources
Career Advancement Opportunities
June 2026 Investment Banking
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Evercore 01 99.4%
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Moelis & Company 01 98.8%
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JPMorgan 01 98.2%
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Guggenheim Partners 01 97.7%
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Morgan Stanley 07 97.1%
Overall Employee Satisfaction
June 2026 Investment Banking
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Moelis & Company No 99.4%
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Morgan Stanley 01 98.8%
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Evercore 01 98.2%
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BMO Capital Markets 12 97.6%
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Banco Santander 01 97.1%
Professional Growth Opportunities
June 2026 Investment Banking
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Moelis & Company No 99.4%
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Evercore No 98.8%
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Morgan Stanley 05 98.2%
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JPMorgan No 97.7%
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BMO Capital Markets 12 97.1%
Total Avg Compensation
June 2026 Investment Banking
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Vice President (14) $434
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Associates (43) $259
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3rd+ Year Analyst (8) $210
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2nd Year Analyst (22) $179
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Intern/Summer Associate (13) $156
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1st Year Analyst (75) $151
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Intern/Summer Analyst (67) $101
16 IB Interviews Notes
“... there’s no excuse to not take advantage of the resources out there available to you. Best value for your $ are the...”
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From 10 rejections to 1 dream investment banking internship
“... I believe it was the single biggest reason why I ended up with an offer...”
Or removed entirely. They're all implied and assumed from his experiences.
I was just saying in general that skills and interests should be at the bottom, regardless of what they actually are, but you're are right that in this case it is assumed that he has those skills and he doesn't need to include them and be redundant.
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More substantively, on this bullet:
"Speculated on WTI Crude and USD to assist CFO in mitigating FX risk and facilitating international commodity transactions"
I think the potential recruiter/hiring manager might be put off by the word "speculated." Yes, you assisted the CFO, but maybe you want to write it differently. Can you think of another verb that would work that shows a more positive influence on the project and on the firm?
To me, I would think that researching, trading, investing, or positioning might be something someone would hire you for. Unless you do want to be hired as a speculator, which seems a bit dodgy. But I could be reading it all wrong.
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I would expand more on your most recent experience. Your skills section should probably be removed unless you have some hard skills or certifications, although I get your probably hurting to take up space as those your age dont have much. I also think the Month - Month 2015 looks a little weird I would change it to Month 2015 - Month 2015.
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