Looking for CV Feedback -- Recent grad applying to MBB London offices

Education

• In the UK it should be BA (B.A. is an americanism)
• I know why microeconomics is capitalised and collection isn't
• Personal preference but I would write Oct 2021 rather than 10/2021
• I don't know what UoE or NCH stand for, and I don't think you should include this line

Work experience

• I would probably cut the dominos experience --  your Amazon experience is really impressive and you should lead with that
• Amazon date is formatted differently
• It seems like you achieved some great stuff while at Amazon but the wording throughout should be sharpened -- make it clearer what you actually did, and what the impact was
• Numbers below 10 should be written out
• There's too much jargon -- it's not clear what you mean by clef professionals
• Don't shorten including to incl.
• The student run consultancy should be under leadership

Leadership

• I don't know what you mean by 3 term cards
• 'Regional and non-regional societies' is confusing -- do you mean national versus university specific organisations?
• Can you quantify some more? What was the growth in the society membership, what was the budget you were manageing etc. etc.

Interests and hobbies

be more specific about film (if you can't say a specific type/ genre cut this) and strategegy games