Please attack it with everything you've got. Ignore 1) formatting (I have an excellent template to work off of), 2) length (the redacted description is a startup and contains about 4 lines of bullets). Thanks!

I know you said ignore formatting, just make sure the line on the bottom under "Additional Information" is the same thickness as the ones above. Instead of "Client acquisition rates increased 300% during this time", consider inserting yourself directly into the sentence. You obviously weren't singlehandedly responsible for those increases, but I might word it as "assisted in increasing client acquisition rates by 300%" or something similar. This is really nitpicky, but it's sticks out to me. You use both "conducted" and "compiled" at least twice.

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