MSF_Villanova_resume
Could you guys look at my resume and give some comments for me as I'm applying to Villanova.
Thanks
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I just got in, so maybe I can help.
Resumes should never have full sentences. Look at Mergers & Inquisitions. Have you taken the GMAT? Have you taken the TOEFL?
Mrchimp, good first draft. Some notes. -General US resume convention is to avoid using "I." So instead of of "I called for customers," the convention is to write "Called customers..." It's weird, but it's how most grad-level resumes are done. -What is the "Smart train scholarship"? It sounds like it could be a good award to mention but "Smart train" sounds strange in English. How many students get it? Why is it called "Smart train"? You don't have to put all that in your resume but it might help us give you better feedback. -You mention CFA prep courses. Have you completed any of the tests or registered to take one? Even if you're just registered for level 1, you can put CFA Level I candidate, which I think looks a little better. -Why no job functions under Baker & Mckenzie? -The name "Vietnam today and future joint stock company" translates strange into English. What does the company do? Is that really its name?
I got 650 on GMAT, 92 on toefl test. And i plan to retake both 2 tests. @bluerlion: Thanks for your feedback. you mean i need to put some brief explainations for some ambiguous points? Smart Train: is the private company. They held a competition to test all students with Finance, Economic, Business knowledge... 7 students will be selected to award scholarship. In my competition, I rank the 3rd of 73 students. the scholarship covers the tuition for ACCA prep CFA lv 1: I will take it in June, next year. Baker & Mckenzie: I start to work at 1st Jan next year as consultant. So I don't know what's I'm gonna do. "Vietnam today and future joint stock company" is exactly my company name. My company is advertising company. They sale the advertising contracts. I know the name sound
-Make the whole document black text only -Delete the space before "Baker & Mckenzie" -I would get rid of the days you worked and just put "April 2012 - Present" "July 2012 - September 2012" etc..
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