Non-Target Resume

always start your bullet w/action verbs "Currently" is an awful start to a bullet point

also, take off 'walks on the beach' - sounds like you are making fun of dating sites or something.

Unless you routinely program for fun I'd take it off.

fomatting critique: change the semicolons to commas for consistency and align your bullet points

hahaha walks on the beach. seriously, take it off, you'll be a laughingstock for analysts.

Also, do not describe what your organization is, write down what you do. you can explain to the interviewer what it is if he/she asks.

Try not to use "as well as" in your first work experience block, it's fluffy language that takes up space

For the SIRA section, talk more about what YOU did for SIRA, rather than what SIRA is, and like nontarget said start them all off with verbs

I would use M&I template

Thanks guys.

Agree with above posters; focus what you did in sira. Also, your experience with ncaa: mention what the result was. Tutored team, resulting in ... Always have a result from your work. Lastly, the soccer experience is repetitive imho, you don't need to have it under activities and interest. Your actions imply that, just my suggestion, though. Best of luck.