This is my edited resume for this up coming recruiting season, I took out the coursework section and the bullets about my treasurer position in my fraternity. Please tear it apart.
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I would also expand on your VC experience. You worked there for ~9 months, did your firm not complete any transactions?
I have no idea what you did at your internships after reading your bullets. Expand and quantify.
You definitely have a lot more space to expand upon your internship bullets
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