Please absolutely OBLITERATE my resume.
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Wow we must've used the same template! I personally am in the hiring process trying to break in, but I have an interview with Goldman IBD, and had a recuriting friend in JPM help with mine so I'll share what she told me:
- Wouldn't put "semi-target" if it truly is, the company will know the name of the school
- Not sure if canada is different from the US, but I wouldn't put the scholarship amount. I got one for the masters I'm currently in and was told to put "merit-based scholarship
- Body looks solid, maybe consider spelling out the months completely but up to you
- Consider taking out the HS ambassdor, I know its finance related, but unless you're going to be making videos, the space could be used for more applicable stuff
feel free to dispute any of this, just passing on what I was told
- Cheers
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Would change your first experience to present tense since you're currently doing that. Would also move the dates to align with the end of the line at the top. Would get rid of 16k and just put Merit Scholarship....
Second bullet point on first experience "Utilized valuation models..." / the sentence just ends, what did you utilize them to do. Would get rid of "utilized" or switch to "building" for a simple fix.
First Bullet on second experience, after the "Class of 2025 there should be a semicolon not a comma. Could also reword to make it flow better. Also same as above, if its present it should in present tense.
Third experience - again semicolon after workforce instead of comma
Fourth experience the middle part of the sentence is weird. Can change to "including utilizing Excel to perform statistical data analysis..."
For "1500" on your last experience you missed the comma 1,500. Keep it consistent.
For Languages would say "Conversational Proficiency" instead of Working
Other than that looks good from a quick glance over. Should have no issue finding an internship this summer in Canada, you are leagues ahead with solid experience.
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this is laurier right?if yes could i pm you?
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