My apologies, but I couldn't get Razume to work (it just kept looping on the "Converting" screen) so I had to upload as an image file.
http://i.imgur.com/YMjz9.png [Edit: Link to updated resume further down the thread]
I'm at a Canadian Co-op MBA school and just completed my first work term in Credit Risk at one of the big five. Applications for my second work term will begin shortly.
Thanks in advance for any feedback.
There were numerous typographical and syntax errors that should have been nailed.
Also, your resume should only feature: numbers, awards, and achievements. It is not necessary to list what you did in a particular job, but rather how you overachieved. The thought process to recruiters is that everyone will do roughly the same thing in any particular role- your resume should highlight how you outperformed anyone else.
, your clientele is going to speak empirical data and numbers- of which you are severely lacking. Think about how you can highlight your work- you have the experience on there, you just need to turn it so that you are selling yourself.
I think you should remove the redundancy - Excel training (top) and the date (bottom)
What did the advanced Excel workshop cover? Is it worth noting?
Proficient in numerous programming languages? Such as?
"Bloomberg Terminal"
When do you write Bloomberg on your resume? I used Bloomberg during my internship for a couple of hours searching for some betas but that was all. Should I list it on my resume or is it better to just leave it off?
Yep. You can keep the wording.
Thanks! Changed to:
•Familiarity with Bloomberg Terminal
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