Resume Critique Non-target MBA

I have recently graduated from a non-target part-time MBA program. I am trying to break into the world of ibanking but have had limited success. Can someone please take a look at my resume and critique it for me.

Thank you in advance.

http://www.razume.com/documents/18999

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Phil Did u really restruc acctg dep or was it restructured for you gven that co was burning significant cash (hist of neg ebitda) Did the company not have treasurer? Intersting the controller would help structure execute line of credit. Emphasize the corp dev experience outside of natural deal process.

 
DurbanDiMangusPhil Did u really restruc acctg dep or was it restructured for you gven that co was burning significant cash (hist of neg ebitda) Did the company not have treasurer? Intersting the controller would help structure execute line of credit. Emphasize the corp dev experience outside of natural deal process.

I did restructure the department. It is amazing how many people will stay at a place that is going no where unless they forced to leave. Company has no treasurer or CFO.

 
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