Resume help!!!
Hello Monkeys,
I've posted a few times and need some more honest options on my resume! I need any and all feedback.
BTW, most jobs I'm applying to are in London.
Thanks!
Hello Monkeys,
I've posted a few times and need some more honest options on my resume! I need any and all feedback.
BTW, most jobs I'm applying to are in London.
Thanks!
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Hey,
You can add relevant modules you took, like accounting, valuation etc.
I think you should quantify your work experience, for example, you say six-figure sales, instead, you can say 200.000+ sales etc.
It seems like you wrote Work_Experience in your heading, maybe I am wrong, check that again.
Moreover, your cleaning company bullets are too short.
Can add the locations to your Projects section.
Take avid traveller and reading out of the interests, they are too common.
Overall you have a good CV with a solid format.
Good luck
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Hey,
Here are my observations:
You can probably remove your excel credential since you mention it in your additional information section.
The insurance company bullets kinda sound like northwestern mutual where you cold call your friends relatives. I think you should flush this out more. What did you actually do? How many people did you speak to? The 3rd bullet is weird, everyone has meetings.
You can quantify your roof cleaning bullets. How many hours did you work? Did you generate 100k or 500k? How did you create value in you community?
The last bullet under your case is weird... are you trying to prove you can work well in a team?
Specify some of your interests. Reading is super vague. Do you read spy novels, people magazine, rom coms?
Sorry if this sounded harsh. Overall it looks pretty good. Finally, why are you applying to London jobs? You'll probably have to mention this in your cover letter because your resume doesn't make it seem like you have a strong tie.
Good luck!
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