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Haven't gotten a lot of luck with call backs for these next summer internships. Just wondering if you guys can find anything wrong with the resume? Thanks.
Interests: Golf, hockey, baseball, finance, politics, weight-lifting.
I would take poitics and finance out of there. Also, did you play golf, hockey, and baseball?
you have pyramid schemes on your resume
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Yea. Shit like Vector doesn't fly and adds negative value. Shows you don't have any common sense.
You took out the title for "Relevant ... Institute", your first financial experience item. I can assume that you're referring to something like an online learning series, in which case you have over-sold it in a negative way. Tone it back a bit and include more honest wording such as "online classroom" or "educational series," because at the end of the day, recruiters will know.
Investment Banking Institute is the name of the class. It's kind of like Wall Street Prep just a little cheaper. And yeah I did Vector in High School and regret every second but don't have anything else to put under real work experience. Thanks for the feedback though guys. I guess I could take off Vector and include some volunteer account management at my school?
Okay, so I'd move that to under your Education section and only put two bullets that include something about "classroom" or "seminar".
Then I'd remove Vector and organize your experiences in two sections "Work Experience" and "Leadership".
Just get involved and start getting more roles in organizations on campus.
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