Resume Review - Queens Commerce
Removed. thanks for comments
Jul 16, 2013
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June 2026 Investment Banking
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Evercore 01 99.4%
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Moelis & Company 01 98.8%
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JPMorgan 01 98.2%
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Guggenheim Partners 01 97.7%
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Morgan Stanley 07 97.1%
Overall Employee Satisfaction
June 2026 Investment Banking
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Moelis & Company No 99.4%
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Morgan Stanley 02 98.8%
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Evercore 01 98.2%
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BMO Capital Markets 12 97.6%
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Banco Santander 01 97.1%
Professional Growth Opportunities
June 2026 Investment Banking
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Evercore 01 99.4%
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Moelis & Company 01 98.8%
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Morgan Stanley 05 98.2%
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JPMorgan No 97.7%
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BMO Capital Markets 12 97.1%
Total Avg Compensation
June 2026 Investment Banking
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Vice President (14) $434
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Associates (44) $258
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3rd+ Year Analyst (8) $210
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2nd Year Analyst (22) $179
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Intern/Summer Associate (13) $156
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1st Year Analyst (78) $151
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Intern/Summer Analyst (72) $101
16 IB Interviews Notes
“... there’s no excuse to not take advantage of the resources out there available to you. Best value for your $ are the...”
Leaderboard
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99.0 |
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99.0 |
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98.9 |
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98.9 |
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98.9 |
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98.9 |
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98.8 |
From 10 rejections to 1 dream investment banking internship
“... I believe it was the single biggest reason why I ended up with an offer...”
Idk if it's just me but it is strikingly obvious that you're in Queens Commerce.
Dude, WAYYYY too much going on there (the margins are painful). No one's going to read all that.
Hi, thanks a lot for the feedback. I just tried to cut down my bullets and fix up the margins; I just re-uploaded the fixed/updated resume. would you say this is less painful to the eyes? thanks!
The margins are better, but still way too much going on.
The entire first experience is just an enormous clutter. Break it down into distinct bullet points. Follow the rule of keeping bullet points to 1.5-2 lines max.
thanks a ton for the critique; seems to be consensus that the resume has too much cluster, esp for the first experience!
I cut down significantly and posted a second version, would you say this is more reasonable?
thank you again in advance
Queens comm.
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