Resume that explains non-traditional background

I'd appreciate any advice on my resume construction--specifically, my main points are how to effectively communicate my non-traditional work/school timeline, and my post-MBA short term positions without looking like a job-hopping flake. I have good explanations which I can easily convey in an interview, but the issue seems to be landing an interview at the moment...

My story:

After high school I went to a trade school and worked as a mechanic/operating engineer. I was pretty successful and had a management position before enrolling in college about 10 years later, followed by the MBA.

First job post MBA-the company was restructuring (3 CEO's in about a year) and my position wasn't safe. (Good move--after I left they send a bunch of the finance group across the country, and eliminated the rest). Rather than risk it, I took the job I have now, which has turned out to be different from what I was lead to believe, and as such is a bad fit for my skills, and future goals.

My goal is an analytical position that enables me to utilize my industry operating experience (corp. development or cost analytics--similar to the role post-MBA). I've included the summary as a way to explain myself, and I'm using two pages to show the logical progression from engineering to finance throughout the industry.

Thanks everyone.

http://www.razume.com/documents/31122

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8 Comments
 
AMLady

Drop the summary
Where is your education? If you have an MBA that is significant enough to include in the resume, over the management position.

Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it. Interestingly, I think your question gave me even more advice--the education info is on the second page, which I should also probably get rid of...

One louder.
 

The format looks nice and I personally do not think it is too non-traditional. It annoyed me a little to read though because sentences are wrapped. Contents need more polish for sure.

 

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