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what a complete and utter pile of shit!
German techno?? Really?? You're applying to bank not for a residency at the now closed Guverment. More professional and less micky-mouse
I replaced it with "vinyl record collecting" I collect electronica, jazz etc. It's a genuine interest of mine, I don't see any harm in that.
You definitely need to fix up those interests....they make you sound ridiculous (no offence if those are your real interests)
German techno...great if you MD will be looking for an ecstasy hookup.
Hahaha well its what I produce as a hobby, but I will remove that. Aside from that is there anything else I can improve on? Working experience descriptions etc.
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on the bright side, glad u didnt blank out the '416' haha
this resume could use a lot of work. far too many things to point out. i suggest you use the wso resume review service... you really need it.
Honestly I would just start over. The format looks kind of juvenile IMO. Reminds me of when I tried to break into trading as a junior at a non-target. Needs a lot more black on the page. The content is meh. I would make a list of skills or qualities that you think they're looking for and rewrite every experience to try to sell them on you having those skills
Agreed with jedi3189, i think you should start over with a focus on what they are actually looking for rather than what you want to show them
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