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You clearly haven't reviewed this thoroughly. Look at your interests - you have a full stop after wingsuit flying (should be a comma) and a comma after hockey (shouldn't be anything). There are other typos throughout too.

 

Hey there, not a bad effort. Good job placing the education at the top of your resume as it's recent. However, here are a few tips to help you improve. You are a missing a summary at the top of your resume and a list of skills. Your Summary is your introduction to employers and it lets them know who you are what experience you have. It also speaks to the position that you're applying for. Incorporating a skills section will help you to incorporate keywords from the job description, this really helps to target the content of your resume and will resonate with AI and ATS. Overall the format of  you resume needs a bit of work and I would recommend building out your achievements to where they have a bit of personal touch. The resume reads overly factual and I am unsure what position you are applying for. I would also recommend putting more focus on the work experience and not so much detail in the extra curricular activities. Your font and writing style needs to be consistent. 

The thing to remember here is that when you write a resume, you also want to show the things you are passionate about and show impact. 

 

In addition to other comments - pls check divider line spacing w/ header. "L" in "Leadership and Extracurricular" is way closer to the line below than "L" in "Language, Skills, and Interests". Also the "E" in "Education" looks slightly closer to the line than the "E" in "Work Experience". Please make header spacing consistent throughout

 

Also would kill "& Skills" in "Languages & Skills" so that it's just "Languages". You have skills on the line below and you only have languages listed on this line.

 

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