Hey Everyone,
I have no interest in a career in Banking or Trading, however I have been reading these forums for a while now and I have found a ton of great advice on here. The field I am interested in is commercial real estate - transaction / broker side.
I was wondering if I could find some people to rip my resume apart. I will be applying to CBRE, Jones Lang, Colliers, etc. Any advice you may have would be much appreciated.
FYI, the format I am using was given to me by my brother who landed a job with PWP using it. My schools career service says this format is completely wrong (personally, I have very little faith in any career service). How is the format?
http://www.razume.com/documents/13593
Thanks!
Expand on the education, minimize the frat section. Indent the bullets. Talk more about results you achieved during your internships vs just listing job duties. Some pretty solid experience, good luck!
This is really good so far. Don't mind your career service center...they tend to dole out poor resume advice.
Blow up your recent real estate internship experience more.
This might be a bit picky but your hyphens (June - August XXXX) are not consistent. Definitely highlight your intern experience more by elongating your bullets and using active verbs and descriptions.
also you might want to take off "Delta Sigma chapter" from your Razume site bc we can tell where you go to school/people will try to ID you...
good luck!
are you bullets the correct/same size? they seem to have a mind of their own
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