Target with IB Experience
I'm a junior at a target school looking to get an ib internship this summer. Please let me know if you have any recommendations that could improve my resume. Any and all criticism will be greatly appreciated! Thanks.
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One thing that stuck out was a lack of demonstrated leadership. I would think about how to portray yourself as a leader in the things you do. Looked fine otherwise. GPA is very good.
Thank you for your response. I do have leadership positions in school but I opted for including the award at the end instead of the leadership positions. Do you think this is a mistake?
Take off Mensa. You have a 4.0 and great experience. You don't need to show how smart you are. It just makes you look like a prick.
Thanks! What do you think of the finance lingo?
I would take out fluent in English. No need to show people that you are from outside of U.S. Also, given such great work experience you had, shrink the education section by 4,5 lines, because no one cares much. Stretch your deal experience, focus on one or two deals you have done, because that is the highlight. Overall, good resume, great GPA. You would get interviews easily.
Personally, with those interests (except classical music, we wouldn't be friends in real life.
I wouldn't put sell-side acquisition. Just give a general statement by saying assist the sale of xxx company to yyy company, and give a couple of bullets of what you did under that.
And just say valued xx company using dcf... or perform valuation using discounted cash flow and comparable companies analysis. save more space.
and change pending acquisition to potential $300 MM sale of XYZ company
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