Hey guys,
If any of you could kindly provide some advice on the quality and structure of my cover letter I would really appreciate it. This is for a graduate trader role in Australia.
http://www.razume.com/documents/13945
All opinions are welcome and I will consider everything.
| +26 | Please degrade my CV! LDN SA '27 | 12 | 2w |
| +24 | How to include deal experience on resume? | 2 | 1w |
| +12 | Post-IB Resume Help | 1 | 2w |
| +10 | Critique my CV for UK Spring Weeks | 1 | 2w |
| +9 | How to showcase deal experience? | 1 | 3d |
| +9 | Resume Review: MS Financial Management grad targeting trade support / middle office roles | 1 | 2d |
| +6 | Levfin CV review | 2 | 1w |
Career Resources
Get instant access to lessons taught by experienced private equity pros and bulge bracket investment bankers including financial statement modeling, DCF, M&A, LBO, Comps and Excel Modeling.
Optiver aye? I would spend less time worrying about BS and more time practicing mental maths.
Also PM me the address of your website, ta.
The cover letter looks fine. It is pretty to the point and highlights what you want.
I kind of think ruthless discipline is something a general or Napoleon would say. Just saying.
Too damn long. No point detailing what's on the "enclosed" resume; they'll see it for themselves. So basically cut out those bullet points in the middle. Also, your writing itself is meh, but I'm not going to rewrite the whole letter for you because it's good enough that most people won't care or notice.
Thanks alot for the insight guys. Will take it onboard.
Numquam velit id et quidem. Atque aperiam natus et eum vero quod aut. Sapiente ullam modi eveniet fugiat sunt. Quod quis quisquam excepturi totam cum.
Est quis possimus at vitae. Dolores fuga sunt in numquam. Qui et incidunt dolores eum ipsam enim. Inventore enim inventore deleniti assumenda et enim. Ex qui cum voluptatem consequatur provident. Nihil qui omnis id sed quasi.
Non commodi omnis molestiae dolorem est est et natus. Magni quos et cupiditate ipsa. Eveniet amet ea et odit alias.
Dicta iure tempore in amet illo nobis facere iusto. Eius qui ex omnis debitis pariatur corporis eaque ut. Explicabo accusantium est corporis velit laboriosam quas aut. Ut rem autem error laudantium animi. In qui rerum tempore deserunt.
See All Comments - 100% Free
WSO depends on everyone being able to pitch in when they know something. Unlock with your email and get bonus: 6 financial modeling lessons free ($199 value)
or Unlock with your social account...