The Christmas Resume Review :)

Hi,

could you please have a look at my final resume and tell me what you think. As I am not a native speaker please point out any sentences which seem badly worded!

http://www.razume.com/documents/29166

Thanks a lot

and happy Christmas

8 Comments
 
PeeatherMandarin? nice

Yes but only on a very basic level took it in collage for 1.5 years...

But anyone any suggestion before sending it out?

Thanks

 

Hi, I'm still a student so I can only give limited advice, but is there a reason that your GPA is not listed? Also, I found it interesting that you listed a future internship on your resume. Is this pretty standard? I'd be interested in doing this if anyone can provide some insight as to how to go about doing this (or if the format he provided is fine)

 
860Hi, I'm still a student so I can only give limited advice, but is there a reason that your GPA is not listed? Also, I found it interesting that you listed a future internship on your resume. Is this pretty standard? I'd be interested in doing this if anyone can provide some insight as to how to go about doing this (or if the format he provided is fine)

GPA is not the greatest and I often dont apply directly (online) in which case they dont care about your grades - in my case it just makes more sense

As to the future Internship: Yes, I was not sure myself but then I thought how else could I communicate this and I mean db is quite a nice internship :)

 

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