Well...

For starters, edit this thread and use the word "Resume" in the title instead of the one you used; it's much more professional.

Additionally, the format and descriptions are a bit difficult to understand. Try posting a resume next time.

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Thanks for doing those things.

poleandreel:

-does this style seem ok? -are my descriptions too weak -will they be confused BC i transferred from stj to cornell? -what things should be ommited or explained more in detail

To address your points in order:

-Not really.

-Yes they are.

-No, they won't. However you should list Cornell above StJ because items need to be listed in reverse chronological order. Also, you could just put a note in your StJ section that says "Transferred to Cornell in May 2010."

-Where the FUCK does the 3.96 from Cornell come from!? If it comes from where I think it comes from, then you should know that your GPA does NOT transfer with you. Getting a 3.96 at Cornell in AEM is VERY, VERY, VERY, VERY different than getting a 3.96 from StJ in Accounting.

"If you can count your money, you don't have a billion dollars." - J. Paul Getty
 

haha ya 3.96 coincidentally in cornell and stj umm wats that brainbecnh stuff? get SPECIFIC in the maintenance one get banking experience- dsnt seem like u want finance at all just IB

 

Haha. the website automatically switched everything. I knew it had to go in reverse chronological but for some reason it changed everything.

and i know the GPA doesn't transfer. I just left that as a place holder bc the website also just put that there.

No need to be hostile and condescending.

"Look, you're my best friend, so don't take this the wrong way. In twenty years, if you're still livin' here, comin' over to my house to watch the Patriots games, still workin' construction, I'll fuckin' kill you. That's not a threat, that's a fact.
 
poleandreel:
Haha. the website automatically switched everything. I knew it had to go in reverse chronological but for some reason it changed everything.

and i know the GPA doesn't transfer. I just left that as a place holder bc the website also just put that there.

No need to be hostile and condescending.

Ahh, I see. Didn't realize it was a site formatting your resume. Sorry about that, I seriously thought you were trying to be deceptive, haha.

"If you can count your money, you don't have a billion dollars." - J. Paul Getty
 

Thanks guys. I found a good template off the website that ^^^^^^^^^ he gave me.

I appreciate the help

"Look, you're my best friend, so don't take this the wrong way. In twenty years, if you're still livin' here, comin' over to my house to watch the Patriots games, still workin' construction, I'll fuckin' kill you. That's not a threat, that's a fact.
 

you have a bunch of awards listed... maybe describe them more? none of those mean anything to me... they could be hard to get, or easy... i mean, I was Time Magazine's Person of the Year in 2006, but then again, so was everyone else, you know... try and elaborate on what they mean/selectivity, etc.

looking for that pick-me-up to power through an all-nighter?
 

thanks again guys.

and yes they are all national awards except for 2 of the,

"Look, you're my best friend, so don't take this the wrong way. In twenty years, if you're still livin' here, comin' over to my house to watch the Patriots games, still workin' construction, I'll fuckin' kill you. That's not a threat, that's a fact.
 

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