Jul 24, 2013

URGENT HELP WITH RESUME PLEASE

any ibankers please tear this resume apart give any feedback or recommendations

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asw71192

12y

You've posted this resume three times in the past 24 hours....

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Action Bronson

12y

why are you preparing so hard for the CFA if you want ibanking? The CFA has no practical uses for ibanking

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Action Bronson

12y

also chill with the caps. for me personally it makes me want to not read your post at all

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SonnyZH

12y

Avon Barksdale
also chill with the caps. for me personally it makes me want to not read your post at all

Totally dawg.

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[quote]The HBS guys have MAD SWAGGER. They frequently wear their class jackets to boston bars, strutting and acting like they own the joint. They just ooze success, confidence, swagger, basically attributes of alpha males.[/quote]

mb666

12y

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EXTRACIRRICULAR is misspelled
Generally limit bullet points to 1 line (extracurriculars should def be no more than 1 line)
Cut down on bullet points (these are internships)
"Created and built" 50-75 is repetitive... why not "Built x slides"?... Less is more... you're too verbose
You forgot a , after Bloomberg
Remove interests, especially magic
You overuse ;
Write out junior (as opposed to jr.)
Fix your dates... graduation Expected May 2014... Oil internship (Summer 2012, September - December 2012, etc.)
Improve wording for bullet points (e.g. "Conducted research on equities, bonds, & financial markets while participating in monthly team meetings"... equities and bonds are financial markets so why not just "conducted research on equity and debt markets... also you combined past tense with current (conducted research/participating) so simplify it. Conducted research on equity and debt markets and participated in monthly [investment analysis] meetings (if in the past).

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