Please Review My Resume - Consulting, VC, Business Development, IB
I have seen that you guys do an excellent job critiquing resumes. I would love if you guys would review my resume. I am interested in consulting, VC, business development, and IB.
I just started putting my resume together so their will be a lot of mistakes.
http://www.razume.com/documents/9629
Thanks alot!
overall, it looks nice. i think it might be the PDF converter, but you are missing some commas and etc.
please take a look at my resume too. thx!
http://razume.com/documents/9633
Founder of Student Investment Fund -Established First Student Run Investment Group? At Wharton??? I call B.S. You really shouldn't lie about something on your resume. If you were meaning that this is hte first fund at Wharton that did this type of strategy, I would re-word.
Being more constructive, I like the lines that separate sections, I follow that as well. However, as razumereview says, your dollar amounts are inconsistent, some with $, some with , etc. Be consistent.
"...designed in fostering growth, discipline and leadership through entrepeneurship." 1) that is bad English 2) does the program have a name? You can't just claim something is competitive and expect it to add value. Even at Wharton, with a program like that, you have maybe 100 kids, max, interested, so it really isn't that competitive. certainly not worth three lines.
for your website, focus more on the market analysis and business development aspects, most of the emphasis is on the last bullet which sounds too techy
what did you find during your market research? what types of market? did this help the company? quantify this
ditto on the inconsistent dollars
agree that "first student run fund" is definitely a lie
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