Wealth Management and Venture Accelerator Intern - Need feedback on which projects/bullets to include

I'm trying to edit and format these for applications to next year's Summer Analyst programs. I'm a rising Junior at a non-target.

Wealth Management Intern

• "Processed security litigation claims for a client with $550 million AUM" or "Collaborated with client and banks to process security litigations for a $550 million client"
• Created PowerPoint pitch books of economic analysis for the Envestnet platform
• Performed technical analysis on managed portfolio to show performance results
• Built new relationships with potential investment clients through marketing outreach
• Created client files containing investment plans, analysis, and contract paperwork

Venture Accelerator Intern

• Drafted capitalization spreadsheets detailing the equity breakdown of funded companies
• "Screened program applications and performed due diligence on companies applying to the program" or "Screened program applications and performed the initial due diligence on prospective investments"
• Worked with a consulting firm to optimize the website user interface for clients and investors
• Created a marketing plan that synthesized timing, content, and distribution across multiple platforms
• Researched and updated the content of 78 mentors on online and internal databases

Essentially I would like some feedback on which bullet-points I should keep, and which ones I should remove. Ideally I would like to get it down to 3 or 4 bullets per internship.

I would also appreciate feedback on wording of the bullet-points that I should keep.

Thanks!

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