Freshman Resume at a Canadian School

Hey guys,

It's my first try at a resume critique on WSO. I just used and modified the M&I format. I'm not using it for the summer but it'll be good to know what are the main faults etc.

Thanks and I apologize if its too blurry.

http://www.razume.com/documents/24572

Comments (5)

Feb 26, 2012

Wow, this is impressive. Keep it up and you should be good for sophomore summer!

Just a question though -- how strong are you in options trading -- listed under Interests? If you're just a beginner I would leave it off, but otherwise you seem like a strong candidate!

Feb 26, 2012

The Ivey degree is a Bachelor of Arts in Honors Business Administration.

I'd leave your high school off, but keep the sat.

Feb 26, 2012

Even if you have pre-acceptance, you are not considered to be a student in Ivey's HBA Program until after your 2nd year application and summer acceptance. You should have whichever program you are currently studying in there instead.

You are obviously doing well for a freshman. Enjoy the school! You won't ever party so hard in your life.

Feb 26, 2012

Is Liaised a common enough word to use here? I'd never heard it before now...

Mar 2, 2012
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