Resume review - must submit in a few hours

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Rank: Senior Chimp | 17

Aiming for several consulting firms. After some suggestions on the forum ive changed my resume. I got rid of the camp job completely and expanded the analyst position. The 2nd link is the new version! Please let me know of any further changes as I must submit it in a few hours. Thanks!

Old
http://www.razume.com/documents/21519
New
http://www.razume.com/documents/21626
Rozen