tear apart my resume

Eliminate "Fluent in English." This is a common mistake.

lol...Fluent in English. That is expected. Unless you are in a non-English speaking country.

You gotta get some Skills on your resume. Do you know any programming languages or software programs? Do you know how to use excel? And I mean KNOW it. MS Outlook? Are you good with MS ppt or MS Access? Computing is important in finance

you have way way way way way too much white space. Try using tables or somehting to reduce it. between every experience there should be about half the space you are using, that should give you a lot more room. also why do you have so many lines of stuff for random stuff like lifeguard ? where is that useful in banking/consutling business whatever, add skills, excell, powerpoint, software, etc also add SAT and GMAT and HS GPA if your within first 1/2 years of college

BA in Econ with majors in Math and Finance

BA is degree, Econ is major. Wut. Maybe you mean concentrations?

third line under business council should say "advance"

Also, I don't understand why you say semi target.. Washington @ St. Louis.

I didn't like it until page 2, the fact that you were a competitive ping pong player really made the thing come together.

Is Washu semi target? Idk honestly it's unclear. Ping pong Player I feel personalized it. No one has commented only business experience, but they do comment on my ping pong and lifeguarding.

Fix your bullet points. Way too general. You're not accomplishing anything by simply listing your responsibilities. Instead show how you brought value to the company.

Thanks guy, going to edit it accordingly. Does local address and permanent address make it cluttered? Doesn't seem normal, but it could make my resume standout. You wouldnt believe the comments i got on saving someone's life, so i think i will leave it in.