Undergrad resume critique for McKinsey/BCG/Bain please!

Hello all,

I've just finished condensing an existing two-page resume into one page. I'd appreciate any comments on it!

Some of my concerns are:

  1. First impressions - I've heard that snap judgments are important when people are reviewing hundreds of resumes daily.
  2. Foreign schools - I'm unsure how my foreign school education will be perceived.
  3. Varied experience - Instead of having 3 bullet points of 3 strong job experiences, I've opted to put a variety of jobs. Considering I haven't done any internships in consulting itself, I'm unsure which are more relevant towards consulting.

razume dot com/documents/28160 (if someone could help me hyperlink it I'd very much appreciate it!)

Thanks in advance!

 

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