Destroy my Cold Email Template

Hey all, I'm a rising sophomore who will be starting the recruitment process soon. Wanted to drop my cold email template and request any feedback as to how I can improve it to be more personal and increase my hit rate. Thanks in advance!Cold Email Template

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