How to sound less scripted when doing the resume walkthrough and the behavioral portion.

Recently started recording my responses to my story and the strengths question but sounded like I was way too rehearsed. I've been told to pretend like I'm talking to a friend but still am sounding a bit unnatural. any ideas on how to improve this?

Is the technical portion ok if it sounds a bit less conversational if the answers are correct?

7 Comments
 

Mock interviews help. Once you get the actual pitch down, it is usually good talking to people. You also want to watch your speed and try to use hand motions as that does help it sound more natural. For technical questions, it helps to know what you're talking about as opposed to memorizing answers.

 

Write down bullets of ideas, not paragraphs. You want to remember each bullet point by a key word or phrase rather than memorizing every word. Once you remember each key word then you can describe the rest of the experience in your own words and tone. Similar to a presentation, where rather having paragraph bullet points, each bullet point is a phrase and you add on to it

 

Ea alias cum sunt. Doloremque temporibus corporis labore. Quos consequatur laboriosam libero reprehenderit numquam exercitationem. Et praesentium laboriosam autem velit magnam. Repellat saepe voluptatum minus et velit.

Dolor qui nemo qui reprehenderit eius. Nisi quam accusantium beatae impedit omnis. Alias porro sint et velit velit eum. Sapiente amet odio nihil sunt quia et dolore nemo. Unde voluptatum sunt qui neque. Ipsam unde voluptate possimus ipsa.

Career Advancement Opportunities

August 2026 Investment Banking

  • Evercore 01 99.5%
  • Moelis & Company 01 98.9%
  • JPMorgan 01 98.4%
  • Morgan Stanley 08 97.8%
  • Goldman Sachs 02 97.3%

Overall Employee Satisfaction

August 2026 Investment Banking

  • Moelis & Company No 99.5%
  • Evercore No 98.9%
  • Morgan Stanley 01 98.4%
  • Banco Santander 02 97.8%
  • BMO Capital Markets 12 97.3%

Professional Growth Opportunities

August 2026 Investment Banking

  • Evercore 01 99.5%
  • Moelis & Company 01 98.9%
  • Morgan Stanley 06 98.4%
  • Goldman Sachs 01 97.8%
  • JPMorgan No 97.3%

Total Avg Compensation

August 2026 Investment Banking

  • Vice President (16) $429
  • Associates (50) $259
  • 3rd+ Year Analyst (8) $210
  • 2nd Year Analyst (25) $178
  • Intern/Summer Associate (14) $159
  • 1st Year Analyst (84) $151
  • Intern/Summer Analyst (75) $101
notes
16 IB Interviews Notes

“... there’s no excuse to not take advantage of the resources out there available to you. Best value for your $ are the...”

Leaderboard

1
redever's picture
redever
99.2
2
Secyh62's picture
Secyh62
99.0
3
BankonBanking's picture
BankonBanking
99.0
4
kanon's picture
kanon
99.0
5
DrApeman's picture
DrApeman
98.9
6
CompBanker's picture
CompBanker
98.9
7
Betsy Massar's picture
Betsy Massar
98.9
8
dosk17's picture
dosk17
98.9
9
GameTheory's picture
GameTheory
98.9
10
Jamoldo's picture
Jamoldo
98.8
success
From 10 rejections to 1 dream investment banking internship

“... I believe it was the single biggest reason why I ended up with an offer...”