How to sound less scripted when doing the resume walkthrough and the behavioral portion.

Recently started recording my responses to my story and the strengths question but sounded like I was way too rehearsed. I've been told to pretend like I'm talking to a friend but still am sounding a bit unnatural. any ideas on how to improve this?

Is the technical portion ok if it sounds a bit less conversational if the answers are correct?

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Mock interviews help. Once you get the actual pitch down, it is usually good talking to people. You also want to watch your speed and try to use hand motions as that does help it sound more natural. For technical questions, it helps to know what you're talking about as opposed to memorizing answers.

 

Write down bullets of ideas, not paragraphs. You want to remember each bullet point by a key word or phrase rather than memorizing every word. Once you remember each key word then you can describe the rest of the experience in your own words and tone. Similar to a presentation, where rather having paragraph bullet points, each bullet point is a phrase and you add on to it

 

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