Review my resume - Applying for IB jobs

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I'm applying for investment banking jobs.

Please be candid (AKA tough, harsh, and unforgiving)

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The words are spaced weirdly, maybe its the font I don't know. It is also too cluttered with all those bullet points. You need to make better use of white space because right now it is quite confusing and tedious to read through. Also you need to use more power words. Powerful language will make your experiences seem even more impressive.

Basically it needs to pass the 1 minute test: When the recruiter glances over it for 1 minute, they will see the most important parts of your resume and also be impressed by them.

 
M.Mulligan

Apparently I cant paste links so just type in www dot mediafire dot com backslash before the rest...
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I'm applying for Investment Banking jobs.

Please be candid (AKA tough, harsh, and unforgiving)

still 6%

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