WSO Promotional Video

Looks awesome, overall theme solid. (For what it's worth) Couple things:

1) The pictures look pretty "photo-shopy"

2) It might be a tad bit on the long side

3) Idk how to do this without coming of like an infomercial, but WSO has legitimately helped (including myself) a lot of people get smart and break into WS holistically and sans any gimmicks.

Pretty good Patrick. I like the blue/black paint theme. I understand you're limited by the tool, but I think the more you can get non-stock faces or videos of people in there, the more compelling it is (people respond to faces). I liked the screen cap from the mock interview.

You also made my pet peeve mistake of using "IBD" rather than "IB" as the abbreviation for "investment banking" :)

Will the Wall Street Oasis IPO be open to retail investors?

thanks guys, I'll keep tweaking it and putting new versions in this thread...need to keep packing for Buenos Aires right now but will get back to it later.

Looks great - agree it's a bit long, you can probably cut it down by having it hang for less time on each heading.

Also, this is very minor and nitpicky, but none of the subheadings have punctuation at the end other than the question mark one(s), which is fine, but then this one has a period at the end which is inconsistent:

Financial Modeling GMAT prep...and more.

Looks great though nice work!

I like it but a couple of thoughts

1. Too long
2. The pictures look poor, for example, the logo with the white background at 34 seconds just looks shocking, can you not edit out the white?

yeah, frustrating it is too long and I can't speed up any more how fast it toggles between slides.

agree the pictures are poor...I'll work on getting them better.

Thanks

Not to beat a dead horse but it does seem a bit long. Truthfully, you could probably just chop it up and make 2 separate videos. The first one could be 0:01 thru 0:29 plus 0:42 thru 0:45 plus 0:37 thru 0:41 then end it with 0:30 thru 0:36 and 1:32 thru 1:39. Just a suggestion.

I would also like to point out the awesomeness of the bull picture you use at 0:16. I found that picture a few years ago and its been my desktop background since...probably the coolest picture of the WS bull I have ever seen.

Anyways, overall it looks really good. Have fun packing.

Regards

I like it a lot. If I was a young little wanna-be banker spoof I would be blowing my load over all those trigger-phrases you list.... In fact, I just jizzed all over myself. Brb

Pretty cool. It is long, but not insanely long. What song is this?

this is getting completely redone. decided to pay some $ and do it right.

stay tuned

Needs more breasts

we are completely redoing this...should be ready in ~1 month