Critique my resume

Hello, I am currently looking for an internship in private equity and I want to make sure it is structured correctly as I unfortunately do not currently attend a "target school" for financial reasons. I took out some personal information; any negative or positive feedback is welcomed.

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Read it quickly and have some formatting and general suggestions.

1) Don't indent your education details - tuck it under your Bachelor's of... 2) Pick whether or not you want to use the oxford comma and stick with just one way. 3) Change "Cofounder" and "June 2012 - Present" positions under "Broadview Road Cleanup." It breaks from your previously established formatting.

General suggestions - Try to quantify more of your experience - Add more about the impacts that your duties had. Try "resulting in X outcome for client" or "an increase in X%"

 

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