DEADLINE coming up!! need a good critiquing!!!
Hey guys i have an internship application deadline coming up and i need some helping putting the final touches on my resume any and all opinions are welcomed. thanks boys.
anyone? have anything?
Thanks for the advice I am defiantly going to quantify it. what do you think about the overall structure of the boutique bank write up? should i add anything else to it? @"UES-EU"
Boutique banks are outside my area of expertise. If you can, try your school's career office or alumni office for contacts.
yeah Im going to send it through to a couple of guys i networked with
You bullet pts are very vague.
Take out AASCB Accredited Add city, state for your school and "expected" for graduation date
Town - no state?
It should be intern, team No comma after investments Second bullet - instead of having a sub-bullet, just use a semicolon. Last bullet about attending meetings isn't really meaningful
Oversaw the acquisition - what does that actually mean? Paper - be specific if you can Various accounts - be specific if you can
present - Present You don't have to say it was difficult - just elaborate on finding advisor, sponsors, coaches, preparing administrative paperwork, presenting the idea to club sports, obtaining support among fellow students, etc. Anything above ten can be written out as a number (25) Did you organize practice and competition?
office - Office
Do you think that adding some number in there would make it less vague? @"Mr. Hansen" like what I did helped raise XX amount of money? what else could do to make them less vague especially the boutique bank one?
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