MM SA - FT Recruiting Resume - Need Critique

nobody is gonna ID you lol. Just post it!

Hey I'll read your resume, and give you a brutally honest answer. Could you also look at mine?

http://www.wallstreetoasis.com/forums/from-semi-target-to-bulge-bracket…

Thanks, it's much appreciated.

RonaldBaconI'm an upcoming senior at a semi-target, and I spent this last summer at a middle-market investment bank in NY as an SA. I'm preparing for FT recruiting, and I was wondering if any Certified Users/people who work in the industry can look at my resume. It's a rough draft right now, and I'm hesitant to post it since it contains some group/bank-specific information in the bullet points. Please PM me if you can take a look, i have some SBs I can give out.

Just joined WSO, but happy to take a look and give you some critique. PM me if you need help.