Need your resume critiques
http://www.razume.com/documents/20682
I'm a rising senior who will be going through OCR this fall/spring and applying to mostly S&T/IBD. I'm looking for the advice of WSO to help me present my resume in the best possible format. Some of my concerns are the following: -Including my irrelevant experience. I chose to leave it on just because i didn't have enough relevant experience to take up the whole page -If where i put my minor is in the right spot
Comment with any constructive criticism or any other mistakes you notice. Thanks all
Just a small thing but 'additional' instead of 'addition' . I don't even know if you need that extra category though since even if you just had 'experience' that last one would be chronologically at the bottom.
Also if you're talking about formatting consider justifying all of your lines instead of left-align. I think it looks cleaner that way.
Good. Another small thing, I don't know why you capitalized "proficiency" under languages.
I think you can touch up S, A & I a little bit.
Add a little more to technical skills - I'm sure you can come up with something. I'd think "maintaining personal investment portfolio" should be in interests rather than activities. Activities are typically school-related In interests I think you just need "skateboarding." Omit the competitions part.
The rest looks really good to me, but that section could use some work/restructuring.
I think if you remove the additional experience section and replace it with what you did in your economics society, any trips that you made, speakers that you heard from, positions that you took would be more related.
You have some pretty good relevant experience. Good luck!
I've never worked in retail, but you assisted 120-140 customers daily as the only employee there? Assuming you spend about 5 minutes per customer... you get where I'm going, but what do I know?
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