Non-Target Rising Junior Resume Critique Pls!

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You have too much shit. Cut out irrelevant stuff and stick to the main points, especially your summer analyst gig. After you cut out the fluff, space out your experiences so they're not scrunched up and easier on the eyes. Style-wise, don't like the bold dates.

So my part-time job as sushi chef and last summer job should be cut out?.

Yeah, your other internships add more value, but need more content. You can add sushi making as an interest if you want because that's actually interesting.

I second what Mr Hansen said. Take out one or two experiences and beef up your SA experience. That's your money-maker right there, and that is what will get you in for the SA this year.

@"TravelBonobo" @"Mr. Hansen" I took your suggestions and re-posted a 2nd draft of my resume. Let me know what you guys think! What do you guys think about my 'Additional Information' section? It works?

Looks better. Your leadership info is still scrunched up though. I would take out "Psychology" as interest unless you have something more specific. That's like saying "Human Behavior" is an interest!

Btw: Potato Capital is a great firm name! Haha

@"TravelBonobo" I took out Psychology and decreased my font size from 11 to 10.5 to allow for the additional spaces, so that my "Additional Info" section wouldn't spill over into page 2. How does it look now?

And thanks! haha. I just thought of the derp-iest thing I could think of :-)

Much better. That's about all I can think of.

Looks pretty good, could still try to elaborate more on bullets if you can. Do you have to put "Co-Major" at the end? You have an extra comma at the end of Fishing. I don't think Basic language is worth having on there. No to typing speed.

@"TravelBonobo" Thank you for all your input! Let me know if you ever post one too, and I'll gladly return the favor. :-) @"Mr. Hansen" Good catch on the comma! I erased that, as well as my basic Korean skills. I also got rid of the "Co-major" part, since I guess it doesn't have to be there.. (but the IB really isn't a 2nd major, it is a co-major!)