Today is my last day at my internship and have networked with alum and non alum. I've sent my resume to a few people already since they asked for it then. But i'm follow up with them and wanna give them my new resume up to date and make my "ask".
I posted this earlier and someone said get rid of Tremedous leadership skills under Leadership & Achievement, but i had my resume edited through WSO paid service and that person added it. Could use more opinions.
Here it is, dont hold back.
Tremendous leadership is something General Patton would have on his resume, and just wanted to point out that he wasn't an assistant manager at a verizon wireless store.
I am the assistant manager, though I work at a franchise store,
What do you think about putting WallStreetPrep and putting LBO, DCF and Merger Model, stuff?
I would remove tremendous leaderships skills. It just looks awkward and doesn't say too much. I would remove relevant coursework, as you are a finance major, entering your senior year, so you are expected to of already the basic courses you listed. Several of your bullet points need to be expanded on. You state lines that have potential, but nothing is actually there. You need to turn these lines into result oriented, in other words, what did this specific task "do" for the company?
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