Please butcher my cv - LDN summers/springs 2027
Quick context: coming into second year economics, applying for 2027 summer internships and spring weeks. Would love honest feedback, especially from anyone in IB or PE.
Questions:
- Do the PE bullets (building an LBO and DCF, deriving a purchase multiple with no stated asking price) actually sound credible for someone at my stage, or does it come across as a bit much?
- Does the mix of PE and maritime/infrastructure work read as one coherent story, or does it just look like a scattered collection of internships?
- With two buy side roles on here, would a bank reading this assume I'll just bail for PE in two years? If so, how would you fix that without cutting either one?
- The most recent role only has two bullets since it just started. Does that look thin, or is that just normal for something new?
- Is there anything here you'd cut outright to make room for something stronger?
- Does this read like a strong candidate for generalist BB or EB banking, or does it come across as too locked into one sector already?
- Any single bullet you'd just flat out rewrite? Curious what you'd change.
